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Topic Started: Monday, 14. June 2010, 18:12 (654 Views)
Cody
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Winter is coming.
Well... if any of you have been paying attention you'll have noticed I haven't made a print in months. It's time to change that, and here's the start of my new series. ;)

http://flame-police.deviantart.com/art/Blue-Gold-167667163
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Pro. Erm....yeah that's all I can say xD
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Jacob
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Amazing.
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Joe
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Hi.
Looks nice. Nice textures, nice wires, nice vents, etc.

The only thing that really sticks out negatively to me is your gloss style. The 'layered' gloss effect (for lack of a better word) just doesn't work.. like how it overlaps and stuff. I dunno, that's just me. I prefer to not have it overlapping at all or have it shaped so it overlaps the whole shape, not just portions of it.

Other than that, very good. Definitely one of your bests.
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It needs to be wider. The edges of the top and bottom extend too far making the center too narrow. Wires could use some work but it's still nice. Good job.

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RyJoe
Monday, 14. June 2010, 19:06
Looks nice. Nice textures, nice wires, nice vents, etc.

The only thing that really sticks out negatively to me is your gloss style. The 'layered' gloss effect (for lack of a better word) just doesn't work.. like how it overlaps and stuff. I dunno, that's just me. I prefer to not have it overlapping at all or have it shaped so it overlaps the whole shape, not just portions of it.

Other than that, very good. Definitely one of your bests.
I mean I've enjoyed the look of my gloss and you're the only one I've ever seen complain about it... if I get more comments about the gloss then I'll consider revising it. ;)

Phoenix - Yeah, the one thing I regret about it is the width of it which is not really something I've ever been too fond of with a lot of Jedi88's prints, but I kind of just went with what I had and kept rolling with it. Shapes are the hardest part for me.
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Wow... Amazing :D Great job :]
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Seth
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It looks decent enough, Flame. :)
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Chesterfield
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Bottom looks way better than the top.
I don't like how some of the shapes have borders and others don't :/ .

Also, I agree with Joe on your gloss :P .
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Yeah, I think I agree about the gloss as well. It is good, but it could be better. :P
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This looks great. Only problem is that it looks too thin. If reminds me of shifty's agarai theme.

You coding this one then flame?

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Agreed with Michael, bottom is a lot better than top.

Glossing and shading needs a lot more work and detail, and make it wider like Phoenix said.
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I love your style of glossing. But yes, width needs to be better.
currently going through my old posts on here... how did you people stand me?
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Cody
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Winter is coming.
I realize it's too thin, there's nothing I can fix about that at this point so no need for anyone to comment on that part anymore. :P

As for the rest of the comments, they are noted for next time. ;)
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u should code it ;p
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Amazing [2]
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Thursday, 17. June 2010, 18:07
u should code it ;p
Psshh, Flame can't code xD
Plus, I don't think it was meant to be coded for ZetaBoards.
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Friday, 18. June 2010, 20:27
Frazz
Thursday, 17. June 2010, 18:07
u should code it ;p
Psshh, Flame can't code xD
Plus, I don't think it was meant to be coded for ZetaBoards.
I'm pretty sure it was/is. Joe would most likely code it. )
currently going through my old posts on here... how did you people stand me?
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Friday, 18. June 2010, 20:27
Frazz
Thursday, 17. June 2010, 18:07
u should code it ;p
Psshh, Flame can't code xD
Plus, I don't think it was meant to be coded for ZetaBoards.
He said it was a Print in his post.... And it looks like a lot of prints on this website... Do you think before you post?
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A print is a design for a forum and/or website that's not coded. Anything can be a print.

Do you think before you post?
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