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Topic Started: Wednesday, 16. June 2010, 01:20 (359 Views)
gkh
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Redid my vox logo.
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CnC please.
Tutorial is available on my channel.
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Jacob
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Love it, much better than what I remember of the other version. The issues I have with it are the bland text and the perspective still seems off.
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Wednesday, 16. June 2010, 01:30
Love it, much better than what I remember of the other version. The issues I have with it are the bland text and the perspective still seems off.
I would say this exactly except I never saw the other version :P
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Madyy
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I remember the other version...I love this one way more...although I'm with Ellusive...the perspective still seems to be a bit off.
Edited by Madyy, Wednesday, 16. June 2010, 01:36.
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gkh
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Hmm. Maybe I should add perspective to the text? I tried to make sure the X had a tilt to it this time.
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Jacob
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http://z3.ifrm.com/53/36/0/p333316/xpreview.png

Squish the part the arrows point to together. That should give the X more depth. As for the text, see if you can do the same kind of effect as you did to the X. :)
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The x is sexy, I like. The text just needs the same perspective.
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Cody
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Yeah, the style is great but as the others said the perspective is off. If you want it to look as if it's tilted with the top towards us, then the top needs to be bigger than the bottom. The X is also kind of weird in the way that it has flat sides in the center of it, whereas a regular X is just two diagonal lines. Take out the flat walls in the middle and that might make it easier for you to work with. I think what Ellusive said is also true. But also, the way you're trying to do it is probably really difficult. It might also make it easier if you made the X at another angle such as these: http://draftbeer80.files.wordpress.com/2009/07/letters-preview.jpg

Really there are a million things that I keep thinking of to help you in this piece, one of them being like an inverse of the Starwars opening text depth-wise and then 3D.
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That's really very nice, gkh. The edges are a little rough, but with some cleaning up that's sorted out very easily. Very impressive, kiu.
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Korsgaard
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Looks better than the first version, but I agree with Ellusive, the perspective is off.
Use Flame and Ellu's tips and I think the perspective will look better and more realistic :)

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