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| WolfEyes | Wednesday, 10. November 2010, 20:58 Post #21 |
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He asked for constructive criticism. Your statements were in no way constructive. In fact they were the exact oppsosite. Re-read his original post. He asked specifically for suggestions and constructive criticisim. If you don't understand what constructive criticism is then you should refrain from commenting. Then again it may be too much to ask of some 16 years olds.... :nope: |
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| M.o.D | Wednesday, 10. November 2010, 21:27 Post #22 |
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besides, this isnt the full rap im still adding more |
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| themeltingmind | Thursday, 11. November 2010, 02:26 Post #23 |
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he edited his post, i saw the original. there was no 'constructive' in it. get your facts straight. |
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| Zema | Thursday, 11. November 2010, 02:32 Post #24 |
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Hey, play nice and drop it guys. I commented on this on F2F. I figured it was about Star Wars. Adding Wolf's parts to it definitely makes it better, and more like a rap. |
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| WolfEyes | Friday, 12. November 2010, 00:16 Post #25 |
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Thanks Zema... ![]() Thought I recognized that avatar and sig on that "other" board. Have to go back tomorrow and wave at ya
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| Travis | Saturday, 27. November 2010, 07:26 Post #26 |
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It sounds alright. Keep it up!
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