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| M.o.D | Monday, 7. February 2011, 02:14 Post #1 |
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need feedback on this rap snippet of verse, rate, whatever, etc. im done with this this one Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by M.o.D, Tuesday, 8. February 2011, 00:47.
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| Travis | Monday, 7. February 2011, 02:23 Post #2 |
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It's pretty good, it doesn't really rhyme all that much but not to bad.
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| M.o.D | Tuesday, 8. February 2011, 00:47 Post #3 |
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bump full rap in first post |
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| Doug | Tuesday, 8. February 2011, 04:16 Post #4 |
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Yo Yo, this rap is so bad, i think its making me sad. Yo Yo, you gotta improve your game, before you step up to fame Its only a matter of steps before you think your the best You aint nothing yet, so you best be steppin before i catch you in my net |
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| M.o.D | Thursday, 10. February 2011, 22:26 Post #5 |
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oh come on its not that bad |
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| Gabe. | Thursday, 10. February 2011, 22:28 Post #6 |
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it's okay but not the best. |
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