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completed rap, see it now, tnx
Topic Started: Monday, 7. February 2011, 02:14 (223 Views)
M.o.D
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need feedback on this rap snippet of verse, rate, whatever, etc.
im done with this this one

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Edited by M.o.D, Tuesday, 8. February 2011, 00:47.
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Travis
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It's pretty good, it doesn't really rhyme all that much but not to bad. :D
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bump
full rap in first post
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Doug
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Yo Yo, this rap is so bad, i think its making me sad.
Yo Yo, you gotta improve your game, before you step up to fame

Its only a matter of steps before you think your the best
You aint nothing yet, so you best be steppin before i catch you in my net
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M.o.D
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oh come on its not that bad
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it's okay but not the best.
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