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'Ultimate Dream' - Poem by IllegallySniped
Topic Started: Wednesday, 16. March 2011, 11:39 (340 Views)
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This is a poem I wrote for my brother a while back. He wanted to join the U.S. Army as a marine.

Warning! Strong Language!
Edited by IllegallySniped, Thursday, 17. March 2011, 06:59.
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What you all think? Good, bad, horrible?
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Tom
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Light that never goes out.
That's actually pretty cool. I like. :P

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Thank you! I wrote it about 2 years ago. I thought I lost it, but found it in a file I was looking through a couple days ago.
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looks nice, a few grammar mistakes but nice
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Do you mind pointing them out. I want to use this in a contest coming up and I need it to be as Grammar-mistake free. :P
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Well, I changed some minor ones that I managed to spot, but please if anyone notices anymore. Point them out. I am use to criticism. :P
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Bump!

I was looking for some places where I could enter this poem. Like a poem contest. If anyone knows of anyplace, please do share.
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