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Topic Started: Thursday, 14. July 2011, 14:51 (289 Views)
Madyy
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I made this one last night...and I actually kinda like it a little bit...but I don't know how to do the other parts of the print, so I figured that I'd post it up while I try to get creative again. xD

http://i.imgur.com/9sg85.png

Thoughts? :o
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Chesterfield
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Looks good Madyy. You're getting better. :# The H2 is really nice. :P

Some things I would suggest, though:
First of all, I think the background is a little too dark. All of the colors are too similar to each other and it makes the overall design seem boring and monotonous. Lightening it up and make it closer to white than purple would increase the contrast between the category and make the whole thing less dull. I also think that the darker second etch line and the gradient inside the cells are too strong. Lowering the opacity and maybe setting it to overlay (if it isn't already) would help with the dark etch. About the gradient, I think you should switch the one you have atm to something less rounded. a smaller white-transparent gradient on a low opacity underneath the two etch lines would look pretty nice I think. :P
One more little thing about the H2... I don't like how you have light etches all the way around. I think on the bottom one at least should be dark instead. :P

Hope that doesn't come out sounding picky or anything. XD It's really really good, but those are some things I wouldn't mind seeing you try in an update. :7
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Madyy
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Haha, thanks Michael. :) I don't know if this is any better. I still need to mess with a few things, but... http://i.imgur.com/FlrG6.png
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Thursday, 14. July 2011, 15:31
Haha, thanks Michael. :) I don't know if this is any better. I still need to mess with a few things, but... http://i.imgur.com/FlrG6.png
I like that. (y) Very nice.
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Drama
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Awesome h2. :o
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Oracle
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The second one is way better. That's a really sexy h2, good job. :)
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Very very nice, Madyy! The only thing I'd like to see is the H2 become a tiny bit shinier so that it really stands out and looks really smooth. Great job, you're improved a lot. :)
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