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Topic Started: Saturday, 5. January 2013, 21:36 (458 Views)
KyleFA
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Well... I haven't used Photoshop for web format or anything for about a year now.. i feel sooo rusty.. :dead:

What do you guys think? Idk what I was trying to do but I made it listening to Gospel music.. lol o.O def not an inspiration to me.. I don't think.. *first attachment

The second attachment is just something I made I want to turn it into a website format but I lost my spark on interest on it.. so if anyone wants to give it a shot ask me for the .psd.
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Edited by KyleFA, Monday, 7. January 2013, 21:43.
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Here are some of my thoughts...

#1: I really like the overall design and idea of this print. I think it is definitely a great idea to begin with. However, there are a few things that I would start working on. Firstly, on the top part of the wrap, there is like a dark grey gradient that is square on the edges, which looks rather tacky and stands out too much. Secondly, your h2 is rather large, I would try to shrink it, and also on that, I think the bottom corners of the text capsule should have a border radius, as it would fit better with the design of the h2. Lastly, the footer seems really weird - I would remove that very last strip that connects to the bottom of the image, it's really random. Overall, I love the design, and I would love even more to see what you can do with it!

#2: Again, on this one I love the creativity and idea of what you have. the orange color and design you have work well. The only things I would change thus far are the wrap should be a bit bigger, and also the inner gradient/glow seems rather strong.

Great job on both, I think you should definitely continue them! :)
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I haven't seen the Psd or #1 :P
But the #2 design is great :D As Nick said, the wrap should be bigger.. Love the color choice :)

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Thanks Nick, and I just I don't know.. I honestly feel like all my work is sooo bad. I just lately feel like I can't make anything decent.. and I kind of forgot the interface here and I want to make something like different but I am unaware of how things are being coded these days.. I want to actually make a theme with someone but I don't want to design something too complicated..

Also I uploaded the .png akash! Sorry I wasnt aware it was the .psd!
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I really think, that you should work on it more, I mean forward :)
The start is good, just some tweaks, and it will make a nice theme design :)

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Really an awesome design i like the color combination over all its a great creation well done :)
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Monday, 7. January 2013, 21:42
Thanks Nick, and I just I don't know.. I honestly feel like all my work is sooo bad. I just lately feel like I can't make anything decent.. and I kind of forgot the interface here and I want to make something like different but I am unaware of how things are being coded these days.. I want to actually make a theme with someone but I don't want to design something too complicated..

Also I uploaded the .png akash! Sorry I wasnt aware it was the .psd!
It sounds like you're lacking a bit of inspiration - have you checked out design sites like Dribbble to see what's trending currently in UI design?

I believe you'll gain a lot if you lose a lot first. Instead of going for the super-complicated glossy designs, try reverting back to simplicity. Try appreciating the art of the typography in your work and allow that to speak for itself. It's always good to get a sense of multiple design styles, so if you're in a slump with this style then you can try what I'm suggesting. :)
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