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| jackie | Friday, 11. January 2013, 21:11 Post #1 |
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I guess this is the most I'm able to get out of me after not designing a full out print for a year. I already know the header is ugly af but please actually give criticism instead of "oh that's great for not designing in a while". Okay? Okay and go. Original: http://z3.ifrm.com/53/36/0/p466333/cough_syrup.png Updates: http://z3.ifrm.com/53/36/0/p466313/cough_syrup2.png http://z3.ifrm.com/53/36/0/p466330/cough_syrup3.png http://z3.ifrm.com/53/36/0/p466381/cough_syrup4.png Edited by jackie, Saturday, 12. January 2013, 22:40.
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| Chesterfield | Friday, 11. January 2013, 21:12 Post #2 |
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oh that's great for not designing in a while |
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| jackie | Friday, 11. January 2013, 21:15 Post #3 |
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I'm going to punch you in the face Michael. Wow dafuq I just realized the sidebar isn't aligned right. Ugh. Edited by jackie, Friday, 11. January 2013, 21:23.
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| Cody | Friday, 11. January 2013, 21:26 Post #4 |
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Now that someone got that inevitable comment out of the way... ![]() Anyway, it's looking good so far - I really like the typeface you used for the username. I'm going to list off my suggestions as they're somewhat all over the place:
I quite like your style, Jackie - it's not like anything else I see. Keep it up.
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| jackie | Friday, 11. January 2013, 21:48 Post #5 |
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Sigh I'm not that dumb. Each category will look like that; it's not a wrapper. For your second bullet, I think you mean they aren't working? I don't see what you mean about the cat borders being blurry, but I just realized that the right light teal bar isn't equal to the one on the left. I actually did try and "connect" the h2 to the border idk I might go back and try that again. |
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| Cody | Friday, 11. January 2013, 22:23 Post #6 |
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I actually believe I'd prefer it if the categories were connected if you're going with it the H2 in that way - otherwise the H2 seems like it'd just floating in that container and not actually defining it. By defining it, I mean the H2 should essentially contain the content - in the way that it is now, it seems like the content is separate from the H2. Perhaps blurry isn't the right word, but the way the light teal interacts with the light grey category makes it seem a bit odd. It's like putting a light drop shadow on light type on a dark background. I just thought of this, but have you considered making the category dark teal or grey instead of light? I believe it wouldn't contrast so much and might seem a bit more natural.
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| jackie | Friday, 11. January 2013, 22:46 Post #7 |
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I did try it with a dark teal or grey - actually both. I think I'm not used to using so many dark colors so I went with what I'm most familiar with. Yeah, I what you mean with how it looks odd (I didn't understand "blurry"). Like it has different levels right? |
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| Steven | Friday, 11. January 2013, 22:50 Post #8 |
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I really like your style, twinnie! It is very unique and gives some fresh looks on some themes.
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| Gabe. | Friday, 11. January 2013, 23:55 Post #9 |
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dat h2 I like where you are going with this but the gray in the sidebar isn't anywhere else in the print. (I actually wanted to design something like this but red a few months ago )
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| jackie | Saturday, 12. January 2013, 00:57 Post #10 |
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It's actually the background color - if you look at the top center or the bottom left, you can see the uncovered parts of the background that match that color. @Chance: Thanks twinny<3 That made me smile c': update Edited by jackie, Saturday, 12. January 2013, 01:37.
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| IAmZAFAR | Saturday, 12. January 2013, 04:51 Post #11 |
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Wow an awesome update the colors are looking aweosmesta
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| jackie | Saturday, 12. January 2013, 11:35 Post #12 |
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Thanks ZAFAR. Update 3 Edited by jackie, Saturday, 12. January 2013, 11:42.
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| Gabe. | Saturday, 12. January 2013, 11:45 Post #13 |
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that nav is sexeh nice work jackie, you should finish and code this :3
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| jackie | Saturday, 12. January 2013, 11:46 Post #14 |
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LOL I don't know how to code. |
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| IAmZAFAR | Saturday, 12. January 2013, 12:02 Post #15 |
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Great update Jack. |
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| jackie | Saturday, 12. January 2013, 12:35 Post #16 |
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.....My name is Jackie. I'm a girl if that helps?? |
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| Gabe. | Saturday, 12. January 2013, 12:40 Post #17 |
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learn and lol at your other comment we could learn how to code together
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| jackie | Saturday, 12. January 2013, 12:53 Post #18 |
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No thaaanks. My life is perfectly busy; no need to make more time to learn how to code zB themes hahah. |
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| Akash | Saturday, 12. January 2013, 14:14 Post #19 |
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Smexy colors, very elegant and very professional type look ![]() |
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| jackie | Saturday, 12. January 2013, 22:40 Post #20 |
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Mm, thanks Akash. Small, minute update. |
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